My wounds bleed and my sorrows hurt,
My heart growls with the pain,
I keep walking on that same rough path,
Even though there's pain in it,
And I keep telling myself,
That It wont go on,
I brace myself, cold from the wind,
To myself I lie,
And Oh! They're beautiful lies!
My heart growls with the pain,
I keep walking on that same rough path,
Even though there's pain in it,
And I keep telling myself,
That It wont go on,
I brace myself, cold from the wind,
To myself I lie,
And Oh! They're beautiful lies!
Of Course, I Will Give A Nice Old Critiquing Stuff. Good Awesome Poem. But If You Wanted To But A Little Rhyme At The End Then You Could've Kept It A little Consistent From A Few Lines Before. Not Like It Matters. :P Keep Writing. :D
ReplyDeleteHhahaha!! :D
DeleteI did not care about Rhyme or no rhyme to be honest,
I just wrote what came from my heart!
Thankyou! Pleasure :)
A good little poem, its short but still its good.
ReplyDeleteHeart speaks the loyal of all.
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