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Tuesday 27 November 2012

Beautiful Lies

My wounds bleed and my sorrows hurt,
My heart growls with the pain,
I keep walking on that same rough path,
Even though there's pain in it,
And I keep telling myself,
That It wont go on,
I brace myself, cold from the wind,
To myself I lie,
And Oh! They're beautiful lies!

4 comments:

  1. Of Course, I Will Give A Nice Old Critiquing Stuff. Good Awesome Poem. But If You Wanted To But A Little Rhyme At The End Then You Could've Kept It A little Consistent From A Few Lines Before. Not Like It Matters. :P Keep Writing. :D

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    1. Hhahaha!! :D
      I did not care about Rhyme or no rhyme to be honest,
      I just wrote what came from my heart!
      Thankyou! Pleasure :)

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  2. A good little poem, its short but still its good.

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  3. Heart speaks the loyal of all.

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